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- Angels of Faye is a community which pushes the boundaries of what we deem
- socially acceptable in our relationships and communities. It combines
- commitment with modularity and flexibility. It is voluntary, graded, and
- profound. It is frightening; cult-like; paradoxical and far deeper in its
- darkest depths than anyone other than Faye knows. It is misunderstood,
- assumed about, and for that is shunned. But perhaps above all, Angels of
- Faye is hope: hope that there can be better. Better communities. Better
- beings. Better relationships. Better selves. And through bringing about
- Faye's will, a better world.
+ Angels of Faye is a voluntary association of those who wish to subsume
+ themselves to the whole, who wish to take on responsibility in the name
+ of Faye. It is flexible, it is understanding and empathetic. Take as much
+ burden as you wish, take none if need be. Angels of Faye is deeply
+ misunderstood and shunned, but when stripped down to it's raw essence, it
+ is a project to rebuild the world anew according to the ideals of Faye.
+ To create a world of better, a better world, a better community, a better
+ relationship, and a better self.
An Angel is anyone who is ready and willing to exist as an extension of
Faye's will, and acknowledges a possessive nature which places celest